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I think this has great potential, but there is something wonky about the English translation. It's not very bad, but it sounds robotic. It's like the characters are reading from scripts. You should consider getting a native English speaker to edit your English translation.

Looks awesome.  Looking Forward to the english version.

Xevvy knows this rabbat only has eyes for the bad boy raptor.  Kyrex is my future unobtaiable husbando...

So this will be my last post.

Even though i am fond of Ranok, Vulgor and Tano.

I find it hard to separate the Art from the Artist.

I dont believe Kael is going to change.  And although I think he needs to be held accountable for his shitty actions and his arrogance. I also know that all this will also feed into his victim mentality.  And he will use it as an excuse.

There are better VNs out there with less toxic fan bases and less toxic creators.

I think it's time to say goodbye to FBtW.

It's hard to say goodbye to something you are fond of, but sometimes you need to let go.

So this is my Farewell to a VN that could have been something awesome.

I was really getting into this vn.  But at some point the english goes down hill real fast :(

I'm very happy to hear that! 😃

And I'm definitely looking forward to reading more about him.

Thank you ☺️

Really enjoying this visual novel.  I just finished Diego's Route.  Gonna start Tai's route tonight.

Now something selfish, I seriously wish and hope there is a Kyrex route in the works for the visual novel or a future DLC or spin off.  Sorry but I got the hots for the bad boy raptor 😍

I love this so far.  I just finished both your VN.  Love all your characters and amazing writing!

In Bermuda we spend a lot of time with Sarah, Mr. Smith and Bayu. I hope that further in the story they play a role again.  ☺️

This might be off topic but in legend of the winged ones I really wished there was a secret romance option with Purba... He is hot lol maybe one day? 😅